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Believe yourselvesOur dreams sometimes make us stare. I often think what the dream is. The majority of people is sure that dreams are just parts of our imagination and our thoughts which we have during the day. I always agreed with them but some days ago I understood that dreams are something more than just odds and ends of thoughts. That day I was very tired and exhausted. I had a very long and difficult day consisting of a great amount of problems which I had solve. That’s why when I came home and lied to bed I fell asleep at once. That night I saw many various dreams, but one I remembered the most had quite simple and tenuous plot: I move to a new flat (I don’t remember the reason of that move) and get acquainted with the woman who lives one floor up. We find out that we have a lot in common and that’s why we spend much time together discussing different philosophic problems. A very strange fact is that this woman is many years older than me but we don’t feel anything like the generation gap at all…I don’t remember the end of that dream. To be more precise, I didn’t pay much attention to this dream and forgot about it…for some time.Approximately two days later I went by bus to my University. I was reading a book trying to repeat some information that I studied at home for a test. Suddenly I looked up and met eye of the woman…from my dream! I bet it was she! I recognized her at once: the same copper hair and hazel eyes, the same striped pullover and lilac trousers. Yes, wearing a warm pullover in May is at least strange, but her pullover wasn’t the object of my thoughts at that very moment. I was thinking about…No, I wasn’t thinking at all! I was extremely surprised, all my thoughts flew away and I was looking at the woman with my mouth opened. The only thought wouldn’t leave me: «It’s she! I recognized her…» I should also mention a very interesting and surprising fact. On her wrist the woman was wearing a turquoise bracelet…my bracelet. It may sound very funny but the bracelet was really mine. I remembered at once that I lost it some months ago. I’d done my best to find it but all the attempts were fruitless. And now I saw the woman from my dream wearing it. In a while the woman noticed that I watched her very attentively. She came to me and whispered: -You’d better believe yourself but not other people’s false guesses.And she went out the buss. I think I’ll never forget that meeting. What is more, I hope to see the dream with that woman once again and I want she to explain me what she meant with her phrase in the bus. It’s already a year passed but I still hope.
29 April 2009 10:33
8 comments:
1. The majority of people *is* sure
2. which I had *solve*
3. lied *to* bed
4. met ** eye of the woman
5. I want *she* to explain
6. *I still hope* ??
1.what the dream is - what a dream is/what dreams are
2.mouth opened - mouth open
3.It's she - it's her
4.lost - had lost
5.had done - did
6.want she - want her
7.explain me - explain to me
8.had - had had
9.had solve - had solved
10.one - the one
11.quite simple - quite a simple
12.studied - had studied
13.meet eye - meet the eye/meet the woman's eye
14.meant with - meant by
The best one, to my mind. The mistakes were hard to find. Nice work, Kate =)
to 13:
1. the majority really IS sure =)
2. what's wrong with "I still hope"? =) hope is good
Mistakes detected!
1. what the dream is - what dreams are
2. mouth opened - mouth open
3. lied to bed - went to bed :P
4. lost - had lost
5. had done - did
6. want she - want her
7. explain me - explain to me ("now explain it to me... why do people think i'm a gay fish???") :D
8. had a long day - had had a long day
9. had solve - had solved
10. one - the one
11. quite simple... - quite a simple and tenious plot
12. studied - had studied
13. met eye - met the eye of the woman
14. meant with - meant by
15. it was she - it was her / it's she - it's her!
Bonus: guess, what does "buss" mean in russian? :))))
1) I have always agreed
2) I had solved
3) Lied on bed
4) I was reading a book trying to repeat some information that I have been studing at home for a test.
5) I want her to explain me
6) I recollected at once
7) And she went out of the buss
8) It’s her
9) The one I remembered the most
10) had quite a simple and tenuous plot:
1. the majority really IS sure =)
2. what's wrong with "I still hope"? =) hope is good
1. really "are", go check it out
2. Just think it's better to use continuous
1 lay down on the bed
2 that I had studied at home
3 I remembered at once that I had lost it
4 I want her to explain
5 to explain to me
6 a great amount of problems which I had to solve
7 but the one I remembered
8 had quite a simple and tenuous plot
9 go out of the bus
10 meant by P.S: I still remember not less interesting prologue to this story ;-D
1. have solved
2. had studied
3.mouth open
4.did my besthad lost
5.want her to explain
6.meant by the phrase
7.quite a simple
8.lied on bed
9.it's her
1)what -the- dream is
2) some information that I -had-studied at home
3) the woman with my mouth -opened-
4) I want -she- to explain me
5) And she went out -of-the buss
6) meant -with- her phrase
7) had quite -a- simple and tenuous plot
8) lied -to- bed
9) had solve-d-
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