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Nothing fascinating ever happen, not even something exciting or at least unusual.Just can't understand why everyone around tend to say that our world is so extraordinary and interesting.Every day is dully: I see everything that I've already saw, do everything that I've already done. Like in that song: the same faces and the same places.I don't know why the police wanted me to tell them about yesterday. Every day is a copy of another.And that day was by no means outstanding. Except for that I had been rather dissipated and awkward, and while crossing the street I was been carried away by the sight of flying iron (damn, they are so beautiful in the sunlight! I'm wishing someday i can fly it myself) and then I've been knocked down by a hipporider (I know that it's my bad, but couldn't he see me!?). It didn't hurt actually as hippo's fur softened the impact.After a small brawl with the rider I've looked at my watch and realized that I'm completely late for my appointment with a doctor (this stupid horn growing on my forehead really drive me crazy).Though I've been 15 minutes late doc Hill received me. She is a very beautiful woman. I can't even decide which of her heads is more beautiful (unfortunately she's already married).Doc Hill looked at me, at my horn. Made fun of it(something about horny or whatever... I wasn't listening).She said that this illness is common for people who suffers from a stress and gave me some pills.Then I immediately headded home to watch a game of quidditch and relax.You see, nothing special.What they have been wanting to hear from me? Aliens, espers and ghosts? Every schoolchild know that they had been all exterminated by humans a long time ago!
29 April 2009 10:56
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8 comments:
1. happen - happens
2. Just can't understand... - a pronoun is missing
3. dully - dull
4. tend -tends
5. saw - seen
6. copy of another - "day" or "one" is missing
7. had been - was
8. was been carried away - was carried away
9. flying iron - a flying iron (or what d'you mean?)
10. have looked - looked
11. drive - drives
12. have been - was
13. suffers - suffer
14. from a stress - from stress
15. know - knows
16. have been wanting - have wanted
17. they had been all exterminated - they have been all exterminated
Bonus: headded - headed (a misprint, isn't it?)
1) why everyone around tends
2) Nothing fascinating had ever happen
3) I was carried away
4) I was knocked
5) I was completely late
6) Though I was 15 minutes late
7) the sight of a flying iron
8) Every schoolchild knows
9) this stupid horn growing on my forehead really drives me crazy
1)happens
2)everyone around tends
3)Every day is dull
4)I've already seen
5)I was rather dissipated
6)I was carried
7)I wish
8)I was knocked
9)I looked
10)I was completely
11)i was
12)who suffer
13)what have they wanted from me?
(what do they want..?)
14)Every schoolchild knows
15)they have been...
1. nothing happens
2.everyone tends
3.day is dull
4.I've already seen
5. people suffer
6. was carried
7. I wish
8.schoolchild knows
1.ever happen - ever happens
2.everyone around tend - everyone around tends
3.I've already saw - I've akready seen
4.of another - of another one
5. was been carried away - was carried away
6.I've looked - I looked
7.I'm completely late - I was completely late
8. I've been 15 minutes late - I was...
9. drive me crazy- drives me crazy
10. people who suffers - people who suffer
11.schoolchild know - schoolchild knows
12.they had been all exterminated -they have been all exterminated
1 Nothing fascinating ever happens2 everyone around tends3 Every day is a copy of another one4 I was _ carried away
5 I wish 6 horn...drives7 Though I was 15 minutes late doc Hill received me
8 She was a very beautiful woman.
9 She said that this illness was common
10 people who suffer 11 from a stress
12 Every schoolchild knows
1) Nothing fascinating ever -happen-
2) I see everything that I've already -saw-
3) Every day is a copy of another -one-
4) I -had been- rather dissipated
5) I -was been- carried away by the sight
6) I'm -wishing- someday i can fly it myself
7) I-'ve been- knocked down by a hipporider
8) really drive-s- me crazy
9) Though I-'ve been- 15 minutes
10) I -wasn't listening-
11) who -suffers- from
12) Every schoolchild -know- that
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